Hello horror fans,
During my last year at university I wrote an exploitation film for my creative writing module, ‘Advanced Script Project.’ According to my tutor, writing an exploitation film at university was ILLEGAL!!! :S and she was teaching the students to write mainstream films, not underground. These comments upset me as I should be able to write what I wanted and I was PAYING HER.
Discussions between heads of Creative Writing were made and I was given a one to one tutor instead where I was free to write as many gory and sexual scenes as I wanted. When I had finished the script I was given a 1st for it, it was my first ever 1st grade and it proves that exploitation films can be well written if you put the work into it and if you are passionate enough.
I am hoping to get this script made into a film. It is called ‘Online’ and it is about a man who pretends to be a lesbian on the internet, meets up with women and kills them in brutal ways.
I am sharing the first few pages with you. I hope you like it.
FADE IN: INT.KITCHEN-DAY
An old fashioned radio on a bedside table. A woman’s hand reaches out and turns it on.
WOMAN’S V.O.
Are you tired of waiting for Miss Right? Are you always the bridesmaid and never the bride? Sign up for free today on LezGirls4u.com, the world’s number one website for lesbian dating.
INT. BEDROOM-NIGHT
A blonde teenage girl is sitting at a desk, facing the PC and TYPING. TAP TAP.
The camera goes to her hands; she has scraggy friendship bracelets and chipped purple nail polish. The camera goes to her face; she is SMILING and develops a NOSE BLEED. She wipes the blood onto the screen with her hand and the title, ‘Online’ then appears in blood.
INT.TABITHA’S BATHROOM-NIGHT
Sebastian, (30, with severe acne) is standing in front of the mirror by the sink. He is MASSAGING cream onto his face.
He puts the bottle back into the cabinet, takes another bottle out and closes the cabinet and opens the bottle and massages the cream into his face. We hear CRYING coming from the bedroom.
INT.TABITHA’S BEDROOM-NIGHT
Sebastian is now in Tabitha’s bedroom. She is NAKED and HANDCUFFED to the wooden bed head, her legs tied with rope to the bedpost.
She is BLINDEDFOLDED with a black satin blindfold and gagged with a BALL GAG.
INT. TABITHA’S BEDROOM-NIGHT (CONTINOUS)
Sebastian walks up to the bed and stands over her. The camera moves around the bedroom for 10 seconds, there are scented candles lit around the room, a vase of red roses on the bedside table and a basket of sex toys next to it. (Coleman’s Hawkin’s track ‘Smoke In Your Eyes’ is playing in the background). Tabitha has obviously prepared for a sexy night in.
Tabitha is pulling her arms, trying to set herself free from the handcuffs; there is BLOOD on her wrists from the digging in of the metal handcuffs. Sebastian picks up a cuddly BUNNY on the bed, stares at it and puts it inside his backpack.
Sebastian takes out a large black tool kit from his rucksack and opens it, inside are SURGICAL INSTRUMENTS and various tools of the psycho trade. He takes out a scalpel and puts it to her neck.
Sebastian leans over Tabitha with his face close to hers; he moves the SCALPEL slowly down her body leaving a trace of split SKIN and blood. Tabitha’s body is shaking.
He moves the SCALPEL back up towards her breasts and traces the blade around her left nipple then he covers it with his mouth and BITES it off. When he has bitten off the nipple he starts CHEWING it CRUNCH and spits it out. Tabitha is SCREAMING under the gag. Sebastian repeats the process with the right nipple.
SEBASTIAN
We’re going for the more natural look
He then cuts open each of her breasts and takes out her silicones.
Sebastian grabs his kit, takes out his needle and thread and SEWS up the breasts. (Diana Krall’s track ‘Isn’t This a Lovely Day’ is playing).
Sebastian takes out a KNIFE from the kit and STABS Tabitha’s stomach multiple times and rips out some of her INTESTINES with his hands. Sebastian spreads Tabitha’s legs, the camera is now on the back of Sebastian’s head, and he EATS OUT Tabitha’s dead cunt.
INT.TABITHA’S LIVING ROOM-NIGHT (CONTINOUS)
Sebastian is all covered in BLOOD and SHIT. He’s standing by the table and logs onto Tabitha’s iPad. CAMERA ZOOMS on the screen. The page for the dating website lezgirls4u.com is open; Sebastian goes to settings, clicks on safari and then clicks on clears history. CAMERA ZOOMS OUT. Sebastian opens his backpack and puts the iPad inside it. He takes out a change of clothes which includes a heavy metal band t-shirt, baggy jeans and a long black wig.
INT. TABITHA’S BEDROOM- NIGHT (CONTINOUS)
Sebastian, now wearing the new outfit and wearing marigolds, is walking around the bedroom POLISHING and DUSTING the furniture.
INT. TABITHA’S HALLWAY-NIGHT (CONTINOUS)
Sebastian stands outside the door holding an empty bottle of PETROL, lights a matchstick and throws it into the flat. He walks outside casually.
FILM CREDITS
INT.SEBASTIAN’S CAR-NIGHT
Sebastian is DRIVING and SINGING along to 15 seconds of the beginning to ‘Prince Charming’ by Adam and the Ants on the radio. He lights up a cigarette and starts steering the wheel with one hand. Sebastian looks for a parking space on his road. Sebastian drives towards The Angel
SEBASTIAN
Fu…
EXT. CAR PARK-NIGHT
Sebastian reverses his car into a space and parks his car. He gets out his car.
EXT. UPPER STREET-NIGHT
Sebastian walks along Upper Street to the many bars and restaurants. All the pubs, cafes and restaurants are lit up. There is a middle aged couple ARGUING, the woman SHOVES the man and walks off with him following her, apologising. A busker is SINGING and PLAYING the guitar. Police officers are QUESTIONING boys in hoodies.
EXT. NOEL ROAD-NIGHT
Sebastian is now outside his terraced house, he gets out his keys, opens the door and WALKS INSIDE.
INT.SEBASTIAN’S HOUSE-NIGHT
Sebastian puts his bag down and turns on the light switch. He turns on his ANSWERING MACHINE and has a message from his boss, Dr. Alexander .
DR ALEXANDER (V.O)
Sebastian, it’s Dr Alexander. Sorry to call you so late but I need you to come in an hour early tomorrow as Seabrook wants to look at the research at 3 rather than 4. I’m sorry about this. OK. Thanks very much. See you tomorrow. Bye. Bye.
EXT.PENTONVILLE ROAD-DAY
Sebastian is walking down Pentonville Road in King’s Cross, holding a coffee and a croissant whilst listening to his iPod. He NOTICES a small child with her Mum drop her cuddly BUNNY. He crams the pastry into his pocket and politely PICKS up the bunny and hands it to her with a winning smile.
SEBASTIAN
There you go
The child SMILES and CUDDLES her bunny.
MUM
Holly, what do you say to the kind man?
The child goes red and looks at him
HOLLY
Thank you for saving my bunny
SEBASTIAN
You are very welcome, Holly
Both Mother and child SMILE at Sebastian and walk away.
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